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Rebuked

Rebuked

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Eloise is the main character of the novel. Eloise is a warrior and princess of dlestrine bethrothed to the prince of narvabut later falls in love with her bethrothed twin. There goes jealousy, hatred, betrayal, unforgiveness, manipulation, seductions, love, greed and taste for power. what will happen between the love triangle? who betrays who? who dies? who gets abandoned? Find out by Reading . Please rate ,comment, share ,send your gifts. Happy reading. Thank you

Chapter 1 The beginning of my problems

POV:introduction

People always do imagine that my life is going great as a princess the first daughter of king vaidemar Louis Archie the most wealthest and influencial king, but no it is not , my life is horrible as a princess. You get wanted wherever you go to but only below to one person.

I am Eloise princess Eloise Archie by name, famous warrior of the south called the kingdom of dlestrine and the region of Southeast Grimaker and the clan of Glyswing . Bethrothed to prince Adir jalphar Abelardo of the west side called the kingdom of Narva and region of Potler, clan of wandala.

Each kingdom has their region and two clans . And my Kingdom is under the region of grimaker and the clan of glyswing and we are the second to the most powerfulqs kingdom.

POV:Eloise

In my Chambers, my maids were preparing my bath, i was being by the chief court maid (Charlene).

Charlene called me with a smiling face"My princess".

"Mmm..yes Charlene"i replied with enthusiasm, and contemplating why she called me out of the blue.

"I think you are putting on weight" she said but yet , scared of the unknown.

"Amm...iii"i asked with so much confusion.

"Yes my princess"she replied boldly.

"How dare....i couldn't continue my sentence , forgive me "your Highness"

She pleaded bowing her head.

Berenice i called upon my right hand maid , someone said i am getting fat i asked gesturing my hands towards Charlene.

"Forgive me your Highness, but you have added so much weight" she was looking so bold more than the usual.

I just ignored and wanted the matter to get settled"is my water now ready", i asked.

It will be in a few minutes , your highness",cosima replied me

Cosima and berenice are my two hand maids and like sisters, i can share my problems with them without being troubled.

I was having my bath and talking with cosima "The bubbles are so foaming today" cosima said in delight.

Knock..knock, there was a knock on the door.

"A maid walked into my room, your highness the tables has been set and everyone's waiting for you", said the maid .

How frustrated i was right here, "i will be right there in about 15 minutes .There was one thing you don't do in the royal home , that's making the king and queen wait .

I walked though the halls and finally arrived at the dinning .

"Good morning your majesty, Good morning you Highness" i bowed in greetings.

"Good morning my princess", my mother replied my greetings beaming with smiles.

I walked myself to my seat ,"Good morning sister's and brother's", i Greeted my siblings . since they were obviously pretending not to notice my presence.

"Good morning Eloise" my elder brother replied me with his daily annoying attitude.

"Ahem...mmm"my father cleared his throat "i called this dining today a reason. The king of narva , king Nicholas Ezra Abelardo and his sons , crown prince Adir Abelardo ,your bethrothed he said now pointing at me and his brother prince emperor Adrian Abelardo will be visiting tomorrow.

"Yes"my mother added ,we want all of you yo be in your best your behavior, "and Eloise you will give your all in making prince Adir comfortable".

Everything is already prepared to make the wedding a success.

And we weren't informed earlier, not even Eloise the bride was informed, why?, "When is all this happening ?"my immediate youngest brother, prince Reagan asked.

My father stared at him with despise " tomorrow Reagan".

I immediately lost my appetite "father is this the only announcement you have to say " i asked with furiosity.

"Yes Eloise"He Replied.

"I will excuse myself , thanks for the meal "i said and ran off in anger.

POV:Eloise

I left the dining with do much anger and started walking around just to clear my head . From the garden to the stables and back to garden and that wasn't enough activities to clear my head, so i took my sword and sent for the royal chief guard.

While fighting i remembered a lot of things from the past , when i was little i always wanted to be a warrior , to just fighting never get married but all that dream is crashing down into the drain.

"Keen ....keen....keen",the clinging of the swords made so much noise. I was so angry and let the anger get a better hold of me.

Slizzzzz....Roshan was bleeding from my cut

"I..mm.mm..so ..sorry roshan" i pleaded while aiding him to inn for treatment.

"I lost focus , i think it is a deep cut "

I told the inn keeper. "Please take good care of him"i will come and check up on him later.

The event of tomorrow was emphasied by everyone in the palace ,i just continued without minding with all the words i was hearing.

"Did you hear?"

"What is going on?"

"The king of Narva will be here tomorrow"

"I hear that he is the mist powerful king

"That's why the princess is bethrothed to his son?"

" is she"

"I hear the son is handsome!"

"Rumours bears it that one offends him and live to tell the story"

And many more things unspeakable.

My mind was thrown afar with all the words i was hearing , i can't take it anymore i was telling myself i went to the stable took a horse a rode outside the castle .

Walking through the streets , there was a lot of chattering and praises. I didn't like the noise , it was upsetting , i needed to think.

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