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The Unseen Hand: A Brother's Deceit

The Unseen Hand: A Brother's Deceit

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I was just Sarah Miller, a high school senior from a working-class family. The Presidential Scholarship Exam was my only shot at Northwood University, my family's only ticket to a better life. I poured every ounce of hope into that essay, my future hanging on each word. Then, chaos erupted. Tiffany Hayes, pristine and popular, stood up, tears streaming. "Her essay," she shrieked, pointing at me, "it's identical to mine! She copied me!" The proctors found our essays identical, word for word. My own brother, Mark, a TA proctoring the test, offered only a strange, passive pity. "Maybe you just...saw her notes?" he urged. Even my childhood best friend, Kevin, echoed him. Their shocking lack of faith, their immediate 'leniency,' felt like a gut punch. It sealed my ruin. Disqualified. My name dragged through the mud. The full scholarship, my life's ambition, went to her. The scandal financially crippled my family and broke us emotionally. I became a pariah, choked by shame and isolation. There was no escape from the agonizing weight of that injustice. My first life ended in a silent scream of despair, a blur of pills and fading hope. Then, the impossible happened. I woke up. It was exactly one week before that soul-crushing exam, a year before my own death. This time, I carried every raw memory of their betrayal. This time, I wouldn't just survive. I' d redefine justice.

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Introduction

I was just Sarah Miller, a high school senior from a working-class family.

The Presidential Scholarship Exam was my only shot at Northwood University, my family's only ticket to a better life.

I poured every ounce of hope into that essay, my future hanging on each word.

Then, chaos erupted. Tiffany Hayes, pristine and popular, stood up, tears streaming. "Her essay," she shrieked, pointing at me, "it's identical to mine! She copied me!"

The proctors found our essays identical, word for word.

My own brother, Mark, a TA proctoring the test, offered only a strange, passive pity.

"Maybe you just...saw her notes?" he urged. Even my childhood best friend, Kevin, echoed him.

Their shocking lack of faith, their immediate 'leniency,' felt like a gut punch. It sealed my ruin.

Disqualified. My name dragged through the mud. The full scholarship, my life's ambition, went to her.

The scandal financially crippled my family and broke us emotionally. I became a pariah, choked by shame and isolation.

There was no escape from the agonizing weight of that injustice.

My first life ended in a silent scream of despair, a blur of pills and fading hope.

Then, the impossible happened.

I woke up. It was exactly one week before that soul-crushing exam, a year before my own death.

This time, I carried every raw memory of their betrayal. This time, I wouldn't just survive. I' d redefine justice.

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Introduction
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Chapter 1
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Chapter 2
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Chapter 3
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Chapter 4
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Chapter 5
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Chapter 6
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Chapter 7
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Chapter 8
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Chapter 9
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Chapter 10
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